as the cars go by
we sit on the corners
of the public walkways
under tattered canopies
that used to be hanging gardens
and fields of golden straw
our chiffon gowns encrusted with rubies
are dwindled to greasy rags
crystal chandeliers and exquisite ballrooms
transformed to milk crates and cardboard boxes
dignity and the strength of spirit stand tall while
we grow accustomed to darkness
Wonderful imagery! You capture the transition quite well.
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thank you so much, it’s my pleasure 🙂
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Violet’s Sisters …. by MBrazfieldM
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Saw this via Reena, and as I said there partiality aside, I love this. Such a picture it painted for me.
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thank you Violet. i live ten minutes away from DTLA i was born there, grew up there, left for school, came back and im still trying to process how my home has evolved. There are many great things here, im not complaining, However, DTLA and skidrow has a large population of aging women of all backgrounds. a few days a week i walk around and i notice how some women still have their make up on or a lovely blouse on or they are brushing their hair, while they argue, are in pain or experiencing psychosis.i am challenged as to what to think, how to reflect how can i help. and then if we make eye contact at times they will smile at me and i can see that their spirit is well in spite of the hell around them.so i write in the hopes that i am not abandoning them. it;s not enough to donate material goods, i feel that it is important to honor the spirit as well.
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Amazing imagery. The real world can be dark, unfortunately.
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Thank you, Eugenia. Yes it is. But, I take a cue from Lou Reed and from time to time attempt to turn ugliness and pain into beauty. Thanks for reading 🙂
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I like the way you think.
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You are a warm spirit! I love your poem, with the vivid imagery, sad occurrences that do bring challenges.
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I’m honored that you liked it. Thank you for reading.
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My pleasure.
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Potent visual imagery here.
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thank you for reading 🙂
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You are welcome 🙂
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Very well done! ❤
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I appreciate your time and your kind encouragement 🙂
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I really enjoyed this one, more direct and packed with a reality punch straight from the bowl.
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You write so beautifully, it stokes my imagination, I can almost see what you do, well almost. It is stark reality and hurtful, yet stunning in depth. Love your work!
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Thank you so much friend xo
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The real world takes away a lot but not our spirit! Powerful imagery here.
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Thank you friend xoxo
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