today God tried your
painting method using skies
and tiny trickled
markings on the sand
He got most of the lines right
clouds and horizon
pebbles and calm waves
well what do you think Pablo
looking at His work
thinking not half bad
you suggested a line there
between sky and land
His and your eyes met
creating soft puffs of light
witness of splendor
This is beautiful.
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thanks for reading 🙂
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Yes beautifully written Hon 💜
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thank you Jen 🙂 ❤
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You’re welcome. 🙂💜
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Really lovely… and I can see the shapes of the painting in the land, though the subject is the very antithesis of Guernica.
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thanks for reading Sue 🙂 we war and yearn for peace after and with some faith our Higher Power can recreate it back ❤ wonderful prompt 🙂
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And yet, the path to both the Higher Power and peace begin within. 😉
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Poetic splendor.
We can but attempt to reflect,
and in rapture, surrender 😎
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thank you, very kind ❤
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What a beautifully written poem. I like how you portray the beauty of nature and trying to capture it just right.
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Thank you, Leanne I’m glad you enjoyed this offering.
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You have to draw the line somewhere when it comes to these things! 🙂
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i guess so Picasso was a little ballsy telling God how to paint lol
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Beautiful writing. How sad that the same struggle still persists in many countries in Europe, the violence may have gone but the hatred is still being fuelled. We need more poems and writing to ensure there is a ‘voice’ that questions 🙂
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Thanks for reading 🙂
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