i hope you look at me
from across this blue bed
immersed in your man business
i immersed in a primal hot urge
turn around i command you
i laugh in my head
i crouch quietly like a tigress
licking my lips fantasizing
of your thirst quenching sweets
raw essence on my pulsating tongue
waiting for you to turn off
the computer lights
and turn on my gyrator circuitry board
i’m bathed
i’m slicked in the patchouli you love
my t-shirt the loose one with LA Kings GO!
flash you a warning i do hope you know
that when you lay here
i’ll nuzzle your neck
tug at your ear
lick down the center
of your bristly chest
and right when i reach there
the music comes on
you get sentimental
and you pull me on up
to kiss and to hold me
and call me your love
that’s when it’s ruined
and i start to crumble inside
i know that you told her
the same thing last night
‘LA Kings, GO!’
Beautifully done.
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Thank you 😊
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The way you started the poem is sensually romantic,
but the ending has a surprise turn that is messed up. On the guys part.
I’m so sorry you went through this or you know people who experience this ordeal.
I love this poem a lot. visually good. 🙂
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Thanks 😊 such is life my friend
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You welcome. 🙂
P.S I like your new default picture. 🙂
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Thank you 😄
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🙂
The other default picture you had was awesome as well. It reminded me of something saying ‘I see you’. hahahahaha!!!!
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Lol I like eye ball it’s the Man Ray/Dali side of me I guess lol
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hahahahaha!!! So, you are a Dali fan? Awesome! Same here.
Are you also a fan of ‘Federico Garcia Lorca? He was a poetic surrealist genius at the time.
What about ‘alejandro jodorowsky’? Are you a fan of his films? or comic books?
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I love Lorca jodorowsky I’m not sure I’ve exposed myself much to his work 😦 I’ll check it out though
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Here’s my recommendation to you:
Jodorowsky films:
– The Holy Mountain (1973 film)
*This movie will change you and discover who you are – emotionally, and spiritually.
– El Topo
– Fando y Lis
– Santa Sangre
– The Dance of Reality
– Jodorowsky’s Dune
– Endless Poetry
* One of my favorite movies by Jodorowsky.
And as for his comics:
– SHOWMAN KILLER: HEARTLESS HERO
– Showman Killer 2: The Golden Child
– Showman Killer 3: The Invisible Woman
Highly recommend you reading his comics. Weird, Psychedelic, and Philosophical.
🙂
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Thanks this is great :😊
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Trust me. You’ll enjoy his films and those 3 comics. He’s got more but I’ll just recommend you to these. 🙂
You are welcome. 🙂
Anything of books or films you’d like to recommend to me…please do so. 🙂
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