for all the life left in his bones he strains to light the cigarette the midnight train is running late he rubs his hands together the mouths to feed are growing into free thinking minds washing dishes at the Shrimp Palace doesn’t buy too many books to stave the pain of the morning news about his lung he smiles at the queens wiggling out of Club La India toward El Tauro taco truck for carnitas and debauchery the midnight train arrives and we both climb in he lets me pass and offers the old legless man his chair the man returns the smile as Valerio’s own smile strains against the hopelessness
I like the stream and especially the way you halted it using space before the last line. Nice read…nice write. 🙂❤
LikeLiked by 2 people
thanks Jen train stops are a wealth of inspiration for me 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes I get that. There very nature holds memories. Well done! ❤👍
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow! This is nicely written.
LikeLiked by 2 people
thank you, Laura 🙂
LikeLike
Very smoothly delivered. Awesome work. Train stations and (for me) hospital waiting rooms are IT when in need of inspiration. Thanks!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I agree friend the humanity floats is the air and permeates the soul thanks for visiting and the kind words
LikeLike