from the depot 🙂
I
crows
gather to drink
water from
the dirty street
i sit in
waiting
II
footsteps
upon the
main entrance
of the lonely
church
tread on holy
III
visions in
my head
i see the
cock will crow once
more and
they will come
IV
to find us
where we
are
gathered in the sacred
house and
take us with
V
their dirty
decrees
it happened
in the east first
it’s in the
west now
Love this. I like the I, II and then the short elements after. An interesting contrast that creates. Also the crows combined with religious imagery. Very deep. I will read again to open it up. ~~ Jane
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Thanks so much Jane xo
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Beautiful lines!
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Thank you friend xoxo
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❣️ ❣️ ❣️
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