car titty and payday organs i thought i heard myself think under the bridge with the tents mushroomed through it dry cheap malt liquor atomizer scent the Nordstroms lobby of the poor crosswalk to the weed supplier across the street the line begins on 18th opposite the Toyota parts dealer scooter boys and eyelash girls the latest in street fashion Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle dolls Scooby Doo blankets fixed on car windows for privacy from the bleeding hearts and muskers with their guns ready for the crop shadows greased upon the pavement from the Great Depression and the miscellaneous gruel penny coffee who knew multibillion dollar hook to look good and begging cups with a winking siren who can’t scream at the scandal of it all starvation degradation insinuation of a world gone sane cardboard living is very thrilling for those who afford expensive drywall hung by the nephews of Cuauhtemoc before the Spaniards took the gold that now sits in microwaves next to Nancy’s expensive chest filled with 38 exuberant flavors
So well done!
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thank you friend Rob and i are happy you visited and liked xo
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I’m so impressed – perfectly timed and your reading is so clear and precise.
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thank you VJ Rob was very patient with me lol we appreciate your support xo
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My pleasure.
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04:03 GMT -OMG
38 exuberant flavours
♥ ♠ ♣ ♦
Oh, Grady! Exquisite.
Grin from ear to ear
[Aces to the Rob]
xoxo
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thank you Master Reeves 🙂 xoxo
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I loved it from the first tones! Great combination of their musical sound and your reading sound.
I’m going to listen to this more than once!
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Reblogged this on Unassorted stories and commented:
I love #promoteyourselfmonday at the GoDogGoCafe website. It’s a lovely community and I get to read all kinds of poems. This one, I had to listen to. Sometimes that puts me off; I find most poems easier to understand when I read them. But this one… From the first guitar notes I was hooked.
I hope you like it too! https://wordslessspoken781842219.blog/2020/11/29/gourmet-two-point-oh/
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This is fantastic!
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thank you friend xo
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My pleasure.
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This was good…but I still think you should have yodeled 😏😏😏😏😏😏😂😂😂😂
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i might’ve not yodeled, but i sure did complained about my whiny voice 😖
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💪👶
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