touch only if you want
to feel life everlasting
my lips keep secrets
divine life circuits
through my very soul fabric
i am womanhood
forever wisdom
standing at the head of all
silent in love strong

touch only if you want
to feel life everlasting
my lips keep secrets
divine life circuits
through my very soul fabric
i am womanhood
forever wisdom
standing at the head of all
silent in love strong
Colega poeta! Delicate, beautiful, and alluring words! Thanks for sharing this amazing piece! Obrigado
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Obrigado Poeta glad you enjoyed it ❤
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Vibrant, filled with strength – all three pieces are very rich with a sense of command. Enjoyed these very much. I think my favorite was the second one. 🙂
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thanks so much for reading, Susi 🙂
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These are all really good! Despite being three pieces, they join together to form a bigger, lovelier verse, and that makes it even more impressive.
I just think that in the first one, rather than touching her with full intention and then experiencing her secrets, the power of secrets and her charm would be greater if someone touches her accidentally and is swept away, overwhelmed, by her force. 😀
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Thanks for reading 🙂
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