7 thoughts on “Mariamne

  1. Pingback: I Write Her Weekly Haiku/Senryu Challenge #17 – I Write Her

  2. These are all really good! Despite being three pieces, they join together to form a bigger, lovelier verse, and that makes it even more impressive.
    I just think that in the first one, rather than touching her with full intention and then experiencing her secrets, the power of secrets and her charm would be greater if someone touches her accidentally and is swept away, overwhelmed, by her force. 😀

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