coronation

May 22, 2019 / mbrazfieldm

my eyes reflect time

my body hides the holy

secrets not known yet

civilizations

rise and fall below my feet

i am anointed

by the sky goddess

her crown she relinquishes

to me the new One

20180822-180413 — “View” from the Daily Doodle

10 thoughts on “coronation”

Susi Bocks

May 22, 2019 at 2:28 am

This is a very cool story! Thank you for your submission! 🙂

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  May 22, 2019 at 2:35 am
  
  thank you Susi 🙂 i appreciate you reading
  
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  - Susi Bocks
    
    May 22, 2019 at 3:08 am
    
    My pleasure! 🙂
    
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Hélène - Willow Poetry

May 22, 2019 at 4:02 am

Very nicely written. 🙂

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  May 22, 2019 at 4:14 am
  
  thanks for reading, Helene ❤ 🙂
  
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  - Hélène - Willow Poetry
    
    May 22, 2019 at 9:25 am
    
    My pleasure.🙂
    
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Jen Goldie

May 22, 2019 at 3:39 pm

Another great write! 😊💜

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  May 23, 2019 at 1:48 am
  
  thanks, Jen ❤ !
  
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  - Jen Goldie
    
    May 23, 2019 at 2:08 am
    
    You’re welcome Hon 🙂 💜
    
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