moon peeks slowly orange glow beautiful at two in the morning
we inebriated on thoughts on old angers and accusations
moon she shows cleavage through silks and laces tailored for her by the Venus
we savage with our voice one fist raised above the other torn lapels teary eyes your cut knuckles my need to run
moon swells enormous pregnant by the Mars no weeping in her labor she knows how to raise the stars
we impassioned and raged swell in our erotic locations kissing negotiations the climax nears the horizon
moon wanes with satisfied relief and the pinkest carnal flush
very well done.
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Thank you friend xo
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beautiful imagery – loved this
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I appreciate you reading friend
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It’s a pleasure X
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Amazing. I love the imagery; it is so expressive and enthralling. Wonderful piece!
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Thank you Lucy xo
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Very nice!!!
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Thanks for reading friend xo
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My pleasure 👍🏻
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This has a great textual feel to it and love the raw imagery
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Thanks for visiting I appreciate it xo
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Lushly hypnotic.
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Tee hee thanks for reading friend xo
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Love the “moon she shows cleavage through silks and laces tailored for her by the Venus” line. Great work!
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Thanks friend 🙂
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Oh, la la! Nicely done, Marisela!
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Lol thank you, Susi xoxo btw I’m working on some offerings for TSOI 🙂
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You’re very welcome! Wonderful! I look forward to reading your work. 🙂
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artfully written
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you friend 🙂
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Nice imagery!! Loved it!!
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Thank you friend
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The stellar tide certainly
ebbed and flowed
with your poem, MB ✨
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Thanks friend X
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I enjoyed this read!
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Thank you friend 🙂
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