composing a dirge

January 22, 2021 / mbrazfieldm

shame
like a flower
blush
bleed the rain
silence
hums the snow
thrust
against complacent waves
dusk
winter grows tired
morning
falls like silk
tired
rest now still

11 thoughts on “composing a dirge”

Lucy

January 23, 2021 at 12:27 am

This is so beautiful and solemn. Everything about it, it draws you in… The rhythm and wordplay especially. You have such a unique style, my friend. ❤️❤️

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  January 23, 2021 at 12:33 am
  
  thank you so much dear Lucy. xoxo
  
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Bartholomew Barker

January 23, 2021 at 5:16 pm

Love the “silence / hums the snow” Great work!

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  January 24, 2021 at 6:08 am
  
  thank you friend stay safe x
  
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rajanisingh885721172

January 24, 2021 at 6:38 am

Beautiful blog

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Kritika

January 25, 2021 at 8:27 am

Great read. Love it.
‘dusk
winter grows tired’
Ah lovely.

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  January 25, 2021 at 8:42 pm
  
  thank you friend xo
  
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  - Kritika
    
    January 25, 2021 at 10:00 pm
    
    Welcome 🙂
    xoxo
    
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Florin

January 26, 2021 at 3:09 am

Beautiful. And complex in its apparent simplicity.

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  January 26, 2021 at 3:35 am
  
  thank you friend 🙂
  
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Misky

January 31, 2022 at 7:47 am

Brilliant rythme and context. I really liked reading it.

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