prodigal tanka

June 10, 2021 / mbrazfieldm

*to Rob

nature in your soul
the light in your heart brightens
frozen in the wind
in low valleys of my world
your blue starlight captures me

11 thoughts on “prodigal tanka”

Kritika

June 10, 2021 at 10:40 am

The last two lines are wow. Loved them.

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  June 10, 2021 at 10:46 am
  
  thank you friend xo
  
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  - Kritika
    
    June 10, 2021 at 10:49 am
    
    My pleasure 🙂 xo
    Hope you are well.
    
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    - mbrazfieldm
      
      June 10, 2021 at 11:22 am
      
      thank you Kritika take great care 🙂
      
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-Eugenia

June 10, 2021 at 11:04 am

Beautifully written – from the heart!❤️

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  June 10, 2021 at 11:21 am
  
  yes it was thanks for reading Eugi xo
  
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  - -Eugenia
    
    June 10, 2021 at 11:36 am
    
    My pleasure!
    
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Dora

June 11, 2021 at 10:32 am

beautiful love poem.
pax,
dora

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  June 11, 2021 at 10:48 am
  
  thank you friend xo
  
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judeitakali

June 17, 2021 at 4:43 am

Beautiful 💜

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