snow fire light thunder the hummingbird speaks
the peacocks have been here for all time just their beauty royal blue tears
heart desires stretching reaching for infinite nothing it seems
i stare the moon frowns at me a spotlight on my shame most gracious lady my eyes downturn
pain and mystery are beautiful holy at times demonic only at someone else’s pleasure
if He wept at His abandonment who then am i to complain
agonizing rainbow look me in the eyes roses die in mid December
that all of treasure’s soul lays bare the blood not on the spear this time but splattered all to see
that a twisted existence didn’t always weave and the past a few exceptions made
that leads me to this Maypole game where spirit and soul are sewn into the coat of many colors
to light the sky in flames of glory and my spark to soar on angels’ arms
for Hunter S
this is so beautifully written
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Thank you friend for reading x
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Nice. Ending was a bit too inspirational/dramatic. I’m not officially a critic though.
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Thank you friend xo
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Really good stuff MB
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Thank you 😊
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Always! Pleasure to have you round here these parts.
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The parts are good 🧡 happy Monday friend
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Happy Monday to you too💙
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Incredible, poetic, and dark surrealism feel. As I was reading it…I also got a feel
of the cut up technique. But, re-reading it – dark surrealism. Amazing write. 🙂
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Thanks Charlie I’ve been watching a lot of stuff on Hunter S Thompson lately I’m fascinated xo
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You are welcome.
Hunter S Thompson was a rebel and a risk taker when it came down to writing what he saw behind the scene of our dangerous world. Not to mention ‘The Hell’s Angel’ biker gang.
A while back I wrote a poem dedicated to Hunter S Thomson. It was a Gonzo poem. 🙂 If I find it on here I’ll send you the link and read it for yourself. 🙂
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An awesome poem
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Thank you Wanda ✌🧡
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You’re very welcome!
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I like roman candles. Unfortunately, I cannot use them where I live!
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Awww 🎆🎇✨
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I know, right?
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Lol laws are so funny. The part of LA that I live in prohibits fire works but if I drive 7 miles north to this other part they are perfectly legal.
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Across the highway from me, the local laws are way different. No rabbits and a permit is required to keep chickens. Less than one mile away!
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Yep I see the logic in that lol lol
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Lol!
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You changed your picture up. You look nice!
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Thanks friend it’s a few months old
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You are quite welcome!
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Very good.
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