neon sign haiku

November 10, 2020 / mbrazfieldm

why the blue in you
when your starlight shines like gold
where have you gone sky

5 thoughts on “neon sign haiku”

d.a.simpsonwriter

November 11, 2020 at 8:44 am

A beautiful haiku

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  November 11, 2020 at 9:09 am
  
  thank you friend xo
  
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  - d.a.simpsonwriter
    
    November 12, 2020 at 6:18 am
    
    You’re very welcome
    
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meltingneurons

November 19, 2020 at 8:24 pm

Very nicely worded and smooth.

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  November 19, 2020 at 11:55 pm
  
  thank you friend 🙂
  
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