to the boy from other poems

July 21, 2020 / mbrazfieldm

if we never fly
if we never dream of life
in other directions
if we never tilt our hats
by Johnny’s tomb
if we never smoke Cuban cigars
and tango with Tom Waits
if we never see each other again
know that you were enough to make me happy

11 thoughts on “to the boy from other poems”

bejamin4

July 21, 2020 at 7:44 am

I’m in love with this. Great work!

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  July 21, 2020 at 7:49 am
  
  Thank you friend ✌💖
  
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Lucy

July 21, 2020 at 7:56 am

Oh, wow. So emotional and moving. Just, wow! I love this piece.

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Midwest Fantasy

July 21, 2020 at 8:13 am

A great love poem.

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d.a.simpsonwriter

July 21, 2020 at 9:35 am

Fabulous!

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-Eugenia

July 21, 2020 at 10:16 am

Amazing!

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An Aki

July 21, 2020 at 10:44 am

Great work!

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Bartholomew Barker

July 21, 2020 at 5:08 pm

Great ending! (Wish my exes were as generous.)

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purplepeninportland

July 23, 2020 at 4:51 pm

Emotional;y charged, and so beautiful.

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  July 23, 2020 at 4:54 pm
  
  thank you friend 😊
  
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Joseph Pinto

August 4, 2020 at 9:16 am

love

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