failing in love

December 8, 2020 / mbrazfieldm

as winter whispers
candles of my eyes light up
my heart pounds for you

mbrazfield (c) 2020

6 thoughts on “failing in love”

ivor20

December 8, 2020 at 8:38 pm

A truly beautiful piece… And winter candles whisper to my heart….

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d.a.simpsonwriter

December 9, 2020 at 9:34 am

Very beautiful picture and poetry

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Seoul Sister

December 9, 2020 at 12:09 pm

Very lovely poem, the brevity makes it more refined💖

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  December 10, 2020 at 5:29 am
  
  thank you friend xo
  
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Bartholomew Barker

December 9, 2020 at 5:52 pm

Brilliant haiku!

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- mbrazfieldm
  
  December 9, 2020 at 8:23 pm
  
  thank you friend!
  
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