
when my mind was little
the skyscrapers were tall
God was big too
the streets were filled
with faces strong that walked alone in my drowning dreams
the functions of my body not under my control
and when the body seasoned into what men had sought
it was as if a flock of doves had scattered from my soul
the moon was maiden too long before my birth and then was trampled on her light fallen from its grace
but today i read about a boy and trees his looking for the life that did live underneath
the soil of creation and where someday i will be
looking at the captivating blue glass crystal skies waiting for His words
🌠thanks to my friend Stephen @ https://fullbeardlit.org/2020/04/08/along-this-path-a-five-oclock-poem-by-stephen-fuller-with-audio for inspiring this offering
Excellently evoked. “Demander au ciel bleu” is a moving title
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Thank you friend:)
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De rien. Many blessings always.
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Beautiful response and thank you so much for adding your words to mine, it is humbling and inspiring. Thank you friend.
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Happy Thursday friend keep on keeping on 🤙
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I have no words worthy enough to describe this. You’re an amazing writer, my friend. This masterpiece totally took me away from these difficult times and I thank you for that. Bravo! Thank you so much for participating.
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You honor me Eugi thank you sending love health and happiness your way 🧡
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😊
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I really liked this, an elegant and eloquent piece.
The French title intrigues me, I wonder what inspired that?
And thank you for following Sound Bite Fiction.
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Thank you friend my community is very diverse as is my background so i have a rich creative well from which to draw from Xo
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You are very welcome, ma chère amie.
I am a Scot who lives in France, so I too have a diverse background (and much longer back story).
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Lol be well my new friend take great care looking forward to reading your site thanks for sharing xo
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I agree with Eugi. This moved me. Thank you.
Pat
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Thank you friend xo
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